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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I like the ominous cloudy sky overshadowing the puppet master dude.
I think I can say I've never actually met one of these...
... touch wood.
How many fingers does the "hyde" have, i only see three...
They do seem to come up with the most interesting, horrible things that will happen to you if you dont do what they say
There's loads at my school. They scare the hell out of me...
Since I don't yet know how you feel about having your grammar picked apart, I'll limit myself to one correction: the difference between "that" and "which." Basically, a clause that begins with "which" is generally set apart by a comma, while one that begins with "that" is not. So, the first sentence should either be
"Beware this creature, which lurks throughout the dAsphere."
or
"Beware this creature that lurks throughout the dAsphere."
If you want corrections on other niggling things, let me know. And I'm sorry if I'm coming off as overly negative... It's just that I really do think these bestiary entries are awesome, and I want to help you get them as polished as possible.
Oh, and if I haven't said so already, the fake Latin names are great. Makes me think of the old Coyote and Roadrunner cartoons.
Thanks a lot